READING WORK 2- PART 2
November 7th, 2006

Hopefully, this will not make you confused as this section is also on our blogspot blog. Well, good things bear repeating.
The ants were getting across far more quickly than Leiningen would have deemed possible. Impelled by the mighty cascade behind them, they struggled nearer and nearer to the inner bank. The momentum of the attack was so great that neither the tardy flow of the stream nor its downward pull could exert its proper force; and into the gap left by every submerging insect, hastened forward a dozen more.When reinforcements reached Leiningen, the invaders were halfway over. The planter had to admit to himself that it was only by a stroke of luck for him that the ants were attempting the crossing on a relatively short front: had they assaulted simultaneously along the entire length of the ditch, the outlook for the defenders would have been black indeed.
Even as it was, it could hardly be described as rosy, though the planter seemed quite unaware that death in a gruesome form was drawing closer and closer. As the war between his brain and the “act of God” reached its climax, the very shadow of annihilation began to pale to Leiningen, who now felt like a champion in a new Olympic game, a gigantic and thrilling contest, from which he was determined to emerge victor. Such, indeed, was his aura of confidence that the Indians forgot their stupefied fear of the peril only a yard or two away; under the planter’s supervision, they began fervidly digging up to the edge of the bank and throwing clods of earth and spadefuls of sand into the midst of the hostile fleet.
The petrol sprinklers, hitherto used to destroy pests and blights on the plantation, were also brought into action. Streams of evil-reeking oil now soared and fell over an enemy already in disorder through the bombardment of earth and sand.
The ants responded to these vigorous and successful measures of defence by further developments of their offensive. Entire clumps of huddling insects began to roll down the opposite bank into the water. At the same time, Leiningen noticed that the ants were now attacking along an ever-widening front. As the numbers both of his men and his petrol sprinklers were severely limited, this rapid extension of the line of battle was becoming an overwhelming danger.
To add to his difficulties, the very clods of earth they flung into that black floating carpet often whirled fragments toward the defenders’ side, and here and there dark ribbons were already mounting the inner bank. True, wherever a man saw these they could still be driven back into the water by spadefuls of earth or jets of petrol. But the file of defenders was too sparse and scattered to hold off at all points these landing parties, and though the peons toiled like madmen, their plight became momentarily more perilous.
One man struck with his spade at an enemy clump, did not draw it back quickly enough from the water; in a trice the wooden shaft swarmed with upward scurrying insects. With a curse, he dropped the spade into the ditch; too late, they were already on his body. They lost no time; wherever they encountered bare flesh they bit deeply; a few, bigger than the rest, carried in their hind-quarters a sting which injected a burning and paralyzing venom. Screaming, frantic with pain, the peon danced and twirled like a dervish.
Realizing that another such casualty, yes, perhaps this alone, might plunge his men into confusion and destroy their morale, Leiningen roared in a bellow louder than the yells of the victim: “Into the petrol, idiot! Douse your paws in the petrol!” The dervish ceased his pirouette as if transfixed, then tore of his shirt and plunged his arm and the ants hanging to it up to the shoulder in one of the large open tins of petrol. But even then the fierce mandibles did not slacken; another peon had to help him squash and detach each separate insect.
Distracted by the episode, some defenders had turned away from the ditch. And now cries of fury, a thudding of spades, and a wild trampling to and fro, showed that the ants had made full use of the interval, though luckily only a few had managed to get across. The men set to work again desperately with the barrage of earth and sand. Meanwhile an old Indian, who acted as medicine-man to the plantation workers, gave the bitten peon a drink he had prepared some hours before, which, he claimed, possessed the virtue of dissolving and weakening ants’ venom.
Leiningen surveyed his position. A dispassionate observer would have estimated the odds against him at a thousand to one. But then such an on-looker would have reckoned only by what he saw–the advance of myriad battalions of ants against the futile efforts of a few defenders–and not by the unseen activity that can go on in a man’s brain.
For Leiningen had not erred when he decided he would fight elemental with elemental. The water in the ditch was beginning to rise; the stronger damming of the river was making itself apparent.
Visibly the swiftness and power of the masses of water increased, swirling into quicker and quicker movement its living black surface, dispersing its pattern, carrying away more and more of it on the hastening current.
Victory had been snatched from the very jaws of defeat. With a hysterical shout of joy, the peons feverishly intensified their bombardment of earth clods and sand.
And now the wide cataract down the opposite bank was thinning and ceasing, as if the ants were becoming aware that they could not attain their aim. They were scurrying back up the slope to safety.
All the troops so far hurled into the ditch had been sacrificed in vain. Drowned and floundering insects eddied in thousands along the flow, while Indians running on the bank destroyed every swimmer that reached the side.
Not until the ditch curved towards the east did the scattered ranks assemble again in a coherent mass. And now, exhausted and half-numbed, they were in no condition to ascend the bank. Fusillades of clods drove them round the bend towards the mouth of the ditch and then into the river, wherein they vanished without leaving a trace.
The news ran swiftly along the entire chain of outposts, and soon a long scattered line of laughing men could be seen hastening along the ditch towards thc scene of victory.
For once they seemed to have lost all their native reserve, for it was in wild abandon now they celebrated the triumph–as if there were no longer thousands of millions of merciless, cold and hungry eyes watching thern from the opposite bank, watching and waiting.
The sun sank behind the rim of the tamarind wood ancl twilight deepened into night. It was not only hoped but expected that the ants would remain quiet until dawn. “But to defeat any forlorn attempt at a crossing, the flow of water through the ditch was powerfully increased by opening the dam still further.
In spite of this impregnable barrier, Leiningen was not yet altogether convinced that the ants would not venture another surprise attack. He ordered his men to camp along the bank overnight. He also detailed parties of them to patrol the ditch in two of his motor cars and ceaselessly to illuminate the surface of the water with headlights and electric torches.
After having taken all the precautions he deemed necessary, the farmer ate his supper with considerable appetite and went to bed. His slumbers were in no wise disturbed by the memory of the waiting, live, twenty square miles.
Dawn found a thoroughly refreshed and active Leiningen riding along the edge of the ditch. The planter saw before him a motionless and unaltered throng of besiegers. He studied the wide belt of water between them and the plantation, and for a moment almost regretted that the fight had ended so soon and so simply. In the comforting, matter-of-fact light of morning, it seemed to him now that the ants hadn’t the ghost of a chance to cross the ditch. Even if they plunged headlong into it on all three fronts at once, the force of the now powerful current would inevitably sweep them away. He had got quite a thrill out of the fight–a pity it was already over.
He rode along the eastern and southern sections of the ditch and found everything in order. He reached the western section, opposite the tamarind wood, and here, contrary to the other battle fronts, he found the enemy very busy indeed. The trunks and branches of the trees and the creepers of the lianas, on the far bank of the ditch, fairly swarmed with industrious insects. But instead of eating the leaves there and then, they were merely gnawing through the stalks, so that a thick green shower fell steadily to the ground.
No doubt they were victualing columns sent out to obtain provender for the rest of the army. The discovery did not surprise Leiningen. He did not need to be told that ants are intelligent, that certain species even use others as milch cows, watchdogs and slaves. He was well aware of their power of adaptation, their sense of discipline, their marvelous talent for organization.
His belief that a foray to supply the army was in progress was strengthened when he saw the leaves that fell to the ground being dragged to the troops waiting outside the wood. Then all at once he realized the aim that rain of green was intended to serve.
Each single leaf, pulled or pushed by dozens of toiling insects, was borne straight to the edge of the ditch. Even as Macbeth watched the approach of Birnam Wood in the hands of his enemies, Leiningen saw the tamarind wood move nearer and nearer in the mandibles of the ants. Unlike the fey Scot, however, he did not lose his nerve; no witches had prophesied his doom, and if they had he would have slept just as soundly. All the same, he was forced to admit to himself that the situation was far more ominous than that of the day before.
He had thought it impossible for the ants to build rafts for themselves–well, here they were, coming in thousands, more than enough to bridge the ditch. Leaves after leaves rustled down the slope into the water, where the current drew them away from the bank and carried them into midstream. And every single leaf carried several ants. This time the farmer did not trust to the alacrity of his messengers. He galloped away, leaning from his saddle and yelling orders as he rushed past outpost after outpost: “Bring petrol pumps to the southwest front! Issue spades to every man along the line facing the wood!” And arrived at the eastern and southern sections, he dispatched every man except the observation posts to the menaced west.
Then, as he rode past the stretch where the ants had failed to cross the day before, he witnessed a brief but impressive scene. Down the slope of the distant hill there came towards him a singular being, writhing rather man running, an animal-like blackened statue with shapeless head and four quivering feet that knuckled under almost ceaselessly. When the creature reached the far bank of the ditch and collapsed opposite Leiningen, he recognized it as a pampas stag, covered over and over with ants.
It had strayed near the zone of the army. As usual, they had attacked its eyes first. Blinded, it had reeled in the madness of hideous torment straight into the ranks of its persecutors, and now the beast swayed to and fro in its death agony.
With a shot from his rifle Leiningen put it out of its misery. Then he pulled out his watch. He hadn’t a second to lose, but for life itself he could not have denied his curiosity the satisfaction of knowing how long the ants would take–for personal reasons, so to speak. After six minutes the white polished bones alone remained. That’s how he himself would look before you can–Leiningen spat once, and put spurs to his horse.
The sporting zest with which the excitement of the novel contest had inspired him the day before had now vanished; in its place was a cold and violent purpose. He would send these vermin back to the hell where they belonged, somehow, anyhow. Yes, but how was indeed the question; as things stood at present it looked as if the devils would raze him and his men from the earth instead. He had underestimated the might of the enerny; he really would have to bestir himself if he hoped to outwit them.
The biggest danger now, he decided, was the point where the western section of the ditch curved southwards. And arrived there, he found his worst expectations justified. The very power of the current had huddled the leaves and their crews of ants so close together at the bend that the bridge was almost ready.
True, streams of petrol and clumps of earth still prevented a landing. But the number of floating leaves was increasing ever more swiftly. It cou]d not be long now before a stretch of water a mile in length was decked by a green pontoon over which the ants could rush in millions.
Leiningen galloped to tlhe weir. The damming of the river was controlled by a wheel on its bank. The planter ordered the man at the wheel first to lower the water in the ditch almost to vanishing point, next to wait a moment, then suddenly to let the river in again. This maneuver of lowering and raising the surface, of decreasing then increasing the flow of water through the ditch was to be repeated over and over again until further notice.
This tactic was at first successful. The water in the ditch sank, and with it the film of leaves. The green fleet nearly reached the bed and the troops on the far bank swarmed down the slope to it. Then a violent flow of water at the original depth raced through the ditch, overwhelming leaves and ants, and sweeping them along.
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November 7th, 2006 at 7:32 pm
mr grosse, what hapened to this website, why is it okay now? and… what happened to all the other posts, not only the ants posts?!
November 7th, 2006 at 7:34 pm
oh my computer just didn’t manage to load the rest of the posts. sorry about that. i see all the posts now.
November 8th, 2006 at 9:07 am
Where is the other website on the death car and blah blah blah. It was surposed to be put on the archives, right?
November 10th, 2006 at 9:11 am
Jek Kee, archive is for the previous posts, divided into months. I think Mr. Grosse should post the other blog on this one because some people (like me) have forgotten the address/URL.
November 10th, 2006 at 10:24 am
The author must have taken a very long time to come up with such a well-plotted story, fitted with excellent reasoning skills.
It is exciting to read about how Leiningen coming up with different plans to defeat his foe, who is also comparatively smart.
The author describes the ants is in such a way that he (or she) makes it seem like the ants are geniuses. In real life, they 1) most likely won’t come in such big lots. 2) will not face a problem of a ditch. 3) are not human-eating. e.t.c. all these points are being modified by the author in such a way that it suits the plot and the story.
I think that the ending will say about how the ants see that many of its companions have died, and have low morale and they retreat.
November 15th, 2006 at 8:56 am
i think that in the end, the ants will wipe out and eat every human and ever thing on Leningen’s side except for himself, he will just be manage to escape from the ants.
a possible title for this story might be ‘ never underestimate your enemy’ like how Leningen appears to think that the ants would not be able to cross over to his side yet they have nearly crossed over, and though Leningen knows that the ants are smart, he does not think that they are that smart.
November 16th, 2006 at 4:42 am
THis is the other website:
http://p5gerosyth2006.blogspot.com/
November 26th, 2006 at 10:04 am
The ants are far more intelligent than any man could think they are. They showed no mercy and did not give up. Also, Len had to much pride on his side. Even the ants knew that the current will bring them close together (not that they know science).
I think the story is goikng to end in such a way that both parties suffered badly, until it is Len versus the last of the ants, and Len won, a happy ending!
November 28th, 2006 at 3:50 am
i think that in the end, all the ants and men will die, leaving like the ‘head’ of the ants and a few other clever ants and leningen. then it will be like leningen vs ‘head’ of the ants and co. then leningen will just manage to escape from the ‘head’ and co and run away
November 29th, 2006 at 9:04 am
The ants sound like humans, but cannibalistic ones. I mean, how would an ant know so much? Like what the author said ants are intelligent, even some humans can’t beat their perseverance, organisation and adaptation. They sure can work together. If they couldn’t, they might end up fighting amongst themselves and destroying themselves in the process. I am really awed by them. They have a dogged determination, exterminating any obstacle, even if it meant certain suicide.
Leningen, on the other side, is a man who commands respect. He looks as if he is used to ordering people about and is still doing it during the battle. The ants seem better equipped in that than him. The Indians might listen, but who knows if they’ll always listen?
If the story ends stereotypically, Leningen might be the only one who survives. Or maybe the ants emerge victorious, though battered and greatly reduced in numbers.
I like this story. The author has written it so well, like he was Leningen and he was battling against the ants. I feel as though I was there, watching the whole battle.
December 1st, 2006 at 4:12 am
Eh, these ants are possesed! And can devour flesh so fast. Maybe the title should be demon-possesed ants.
December 7th, 2006 at 12:40 am
Yu Teng: I agree with you that those ants are smart, and their perseverance, organisation and adaption would make them win the battle. As for Leningen, maybe if he had listened to District Commissioner, he would have been able to save the lives of all his workers and even himself! Like what the District Commissioner said, his obstinacy endangered not only himself, but the lives of his four hundred workers. On the other hand, to Leningen, perhaps he felt that the plantation was more important than his life.
Darren: Those ants are not possesed or what- There are really such carnivorous ants( not in Singapore)!
December 10th, 2006 at 10:19 am
Cannibals… Thats a funny word. Usually we think of ants as a pest. Eating traces of sugar, sweets and whatnot. We think nothing of them, killing them with a stomp of our feet. But little did we know… the cunningness and smartness of them. The ants are definitely determined, allowing nothing to stop them in their way. From their actions we can conclude that they are smart, which leads us to think whether they are in fact smarter than us in colonies.
Zi Bing: Where do you propose these cannibal ants of which you speak are found?
December 17th, 2006 at 9:31 pm
I think that the ants would retreat as a result of Leiningen’s tactics.
December 17th, 2006 at 11:17 pm
I don’t think that the ants would retreat.
Leiningen wouldn’t allow them to retreat without much of a fight and anyway, their way of life wouldn’t let them even “think” of retreating
January 1st, 2007 at 5:42 am
Interesting, Leiningen is very clever and comes up with great ideas. The plantation is safe……….for now.
The ants are also very gd. I did NOT know that that ants could build rafts!!!!!!!!!!