Reading Work 2 – Part 4
November 24th, 2006

This is the final part of the story, actually entitle “Leiningen versus the ants” by Carl Stephenson.
Although there are not many comments for this story, its ok as I presume mayy people are away on holiday.
This will be my last post for at least two weeks as I am going to America tonight for a 2 week study trip with other Singaporean educators. If I can post from there, I will try to do so.
Then out of the inferno of his bewilderment rose a terrifying inspiration. Yes, one hope remained, and one alone. It might be possible to dam the great river completely, so that its waters would fill not only the water ditch but overflow into the entire gigantic “saucer” of land in which lay the plantation.
The far bank of the river was too high for the waters to escape that way. The stone breakwater ran between the river and the plantation; its only gaps occurred where the “horseshoe” ends of the water ditch passed into the river. So its waters would not only be forced to inundate into the plantation, they would also be held there by the breakwater until they rose to its own high level. In half an hour, perhaps even earlier, the plantation and its hostile army of occupation would be flooded.
The ranch house and outbuildings stood upon rising ground. Their foundations were higher than the breakwater, so the flood would not reach them. And any remaining ants trying to ascend the slope could be repulsed by petrol.
It was possible–yes, if one could only get to the dam! A distance of nearly two miles lay between the ranch house and the weir–two miles of ants. Those two peons had managed only a fifth of that distance at the cost of their lives. Was there an Indian daring enough after that to run the gauntlet five times as far? Hardly likely; and if there were, his prospect of getting back was almost nil.
No, there was only one thing for it, he’d have to make the attempt himself; he might just as well be running as sitting still, anyway, when the ants finally got him. Besides, there was a bit of a chance. Perhaps the ants weren’t so almighty, after all; perhaps he had allowed the mass suggestion of that evil black throng to hypnotize him, just as a snake fascinates and overpowers.
The ants were building their bridges. Leiningen got up on a chair. “Hey, lads, listen to me!” he cried. Slowly and listlessly, from all sides of the trench, the men began to shuffle towards him, the apathy of death already stamped on their faces.
“Listen, lads!” he shouted. “You’re frightened of those beggars, but you’re a damn sight more frightened of me, and I’m proud of you. There’s still a chance to save our lives–by flooding the plantation from the river. Now one of you might manage to get as far as the weir–but he’d never come back. Well, I’m not going to let you try it; if I did I’d be worse than one of those ants. No, I called the tune, and now I’m going to pay the piper.
“The moment I’m over the ditch, set fire to the petrol. That’ll allow time for the flood to do the trick. Then all you have to do is wait here all snug and quiet till I’m back. Yes, I’m coming back, trust me”–he grinned–”when I’ve finished my slimming-cure.”
He pulled on high leather boots, drew heavy gauntlets over his hands, and stuffed the spaces between breeches and boots, gauntlets and arms, shirt and neck, with rags soaked in petrol. With close-fitting mosquito goggles he shielded his eyes, knowing too well the ants’ dodge of first robbing their victim of sight. Finally, he plugged his nostrils and ears with cotton-wool, and let the peons drench his clothes with petrol.
He was about to set off, when the old Indian medicine man came up to him; he had a wondrous salve, he said, prepared from a species of chafer whose odor was intolerable to ants. Yes, this odor protected these chafers from the attacks of even the most murderous ants. The Indian smeared the boss’ boots, his gauntlets, and his face over and over with the extract.
Leiningen then remembered the paralyzing effect of ants’ venom, and the Indian gave him a gourd full of the medicine he had administered to the bitten peon at the water ditch. The planter drank it down without noticing its bitter taste; his mind was already at the weir.
He started of towards the northwest corner of the trench. With a bound he was over–and among the ants.
The beleaguered garrison had no opportunity to watch Leiningen’s race against death. The ants were climbing the inner bank again-the lurid ring of petrol blazed aloft. For the fourth time that day the reflection from the fire shone on the sweating faces of the imprisoned men, and on the reddish-black cuirasses of their oppressors. The red and blue, dark-edged flames leaped vividly now, celebrating what? The funeral pyre of the four hundred, or of the hosts of destruction? Leiningen ran. He ran in long, equal strides, with only one thought, one sensation, in his being–he must get through. He dodged all trees and shrubs; except for the split seconds his soles touched the ground the ants should have no opportunity to alight on him. That they would get to him soon, despite the salve on his boots, the petrol in his clothes, he realized only too well, but he knew even more surely that he must, and that he would, get to the weir.
Apparently the salve was some use after all; not until he reached halfway did he feel ants under his clothes, and a few on his face. Mechanically, in his stride, he struck at them, scarcely conscious of their bites. He saw he was drawing appreciably nearer the weir–the distance grew less and less–sank to five hundred–three–two–one hundred yards.
Then he was at the weir and gripping the ant-hulled wheel. Hardly had he seized it when a horde of infuriated ants flowed over his hands, arms and shoulders. He started the wheel–before it turned once on its axis the swarm covered his face. Leiningen strained like a madman, his lips pressed tight; if he opened them to draw breath. . . .
He turned and turned; slowly the dam lowered until it reached the bed of the river. Already the water was overflowing the ditch. Another minute, and the river was pouring through the near-by gap in the breakwater. The flooding of the plantation had begun.
Leiningen let go the wheel. Now, for the first time, he realized he was coated from head to foot with a layer of ants. In spite of the petrol his clothes were full of them, several had got to his body or were clinging to his face. Now that he had completed his task, he felt the smart raging over his flesh from the bites of sawing and piercing insects.
Frantic with pain, he almost plunged into the river. To be ripped and splashed to shreds by paranhas? Already he was running the return journey, knocking ants from his gloves and jacket, brushing them from his bloodied face, squashing thern to death under his clothes.
One of the creatures bit him just below the rim of his goggles; he managed to tear it away, but the agony of the bite and its etching acid drilled into the eye nerves; he saw now through circles of fire into a milky mist, then he ran for a time almost blinded, knowing that if he once tripped and fell…. The old Indian’s brew didn’t seem much good; it weakened the poison a bit, but didn’t get rid of it. His heart pounded as if it would burst; blood roared in his ears; a giant’s fist battered his lungs.
Then he could see again, but the burning girdle of petrol appeared infinitely far away; he could not last half that distance. Swift-changing pictures flashed through his head, episodes in his life, while in another part of his brain a cool and impartial onlooker informed this ant-blurred, gasping, exhausted bundle named Leiningen that such a rushing panorama of scenes from one’s past is seen only in the moment before death.
A stone in the path . . . to weak to avoid it . . . the planter stumbled and collapsed. He tried to rise . . . he must be pinned under a rock . . . it was impossible . . . the slightest movement was impossible . . . .
Then all at once he saw, starkly clear and huge, and, right before his eyes, furred with ants, towering and swaying in its death agony, the pampas stag. In six minutes–gnawed to the bones. God, he couldn’t die like that! And something outside him seemed to drag him to his feet. He tottered. He began to stagger forward again.
Through the blazing ring hurtled an apparition which, as soon as it reached the ground on the inner side, fell full length and did not move. Leiningen, at the moment he made that leap through the flames, lost consciousness for the first time in his life. As he lay there, with glazing eyes and lacerated face, he appeared a man returned from the grave. The peons rushed to him, stripped off his clothes, tore away the ants from a body that seemed almost one open wound; in some paces the bones were showing. They carried him into the ranch house.
As the curtain of flames lowered, one could see in place of the illimitable host of ants an extensive vista of water. The thwarted river had swept over the plantation, carrying with it the entire army. The water had collected and mounted in the great “saucer,” while the ants had in vain attempted to reach the hill on which stood the ranch house. The girdle of flames held them back.
And so imprisoned between water and fire, they had been delivered into the annihilation that was their god. And near the farther mouth of the water ditch, where the stone mole had its second gap, the ocean swept the lost battalions into the river, to vanish forever.
The ring of fire dwindled as the water mounted to the petrol trench, and quenched the dimming flames. The inundation rose higher and higher: because its outflow was impeded by the timber and underbrush it had carried along with it, its surface required some time to reach the top of the high stone breakwater and discharge over it the rest of the shattered army.
It swelled over ant-stippled shrubs and bushes, until it washed against the foot of the knoll whereon the besieged had taken refuge. For a while an alluvial of ants tried again and again to attain this dry land, only to be repulsed by streams of petrol back into the merciless flood.
Leiningen lay on his bed, his body swathed from head to foot in bandages. With fomentations and salves, they had managed to stop the bleeding, and had dressed his many wounds. Now they thronged around him, one question in every face. Would he recover? “He won’t die,” said the old man who had bandaged him, “if he doesn’t want to.”
The planter opened his eyes. “Everything in order?” he asked.
“They’re gone,” said his nurse. “To hell.” He held out to his master a gourd full of a powerful sleeping draught. Leiningen gulped it down.
“I told you I’d come back,” he murmured, “even if I am a bit streamlined.” He grinned and shut his eyes. He slept.
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November 24th, 2006 at 8:25 am
so leningen defeated the ants in the end, but i dont really understand how he managed to do that. ‘Now that he had completed his task, he felt the smart raging over his flesh from the bites of sawing and piercing insects’ shows that he did not really feel any pain until he completed his task to get to the weir, which is not really possible considering that the ants are deadly. also, as quoted, ‘Now that he had completed his task’ does that mean that going back to the ranch is not part of his task? how come with his mind on going to the weir to flood and hence kill the ants, he could be so determined and yet when he was starting to go back he suddenly lost his will power?
November 25th, 2006 at 9:06 am
w00t the ants are dead! yay and why do so many stories have this kind of ending, so…. errr.. like, it made me say “it just ends like that? that was fast!”. and did len survive? the last part said that he slept,, does that mean he never woke up? i think he gave len the sleeping draught to ease his pain, like kill him and stop his suffering.
November 26th, 2006 at 8:38 am
Personaly, I thought the end was too sudden.
November 26th, 2006 at 10:45 pm
I don’t think len should have bothered with the ants in the first place. It’s not as if his family had been killed by evil ferocious ants and he NEEDED to take revenge.
November 27th, 2006 at 2:47 am
So, Len just went to sleep or was put to sleep in the end? I do not understand.
November 28th, 2006 at 4:10 am
Since Leningen has totally damaged his plantation, why was he so happy? This means he would have to start from scratch again. I think that he was just sleeping…(I mean the ending part) At least he won the battle…
November 28th, 2006 at 4:45 am
i’m kind of surprised that leningen defeated the ants and that he survived the bites. i think it’s the thought of defeating the ants once and for all that made him not feel the bites of the ants when he went to the weir.
i think leningen has a very good character, he persevered even when the pain of the ant-bites were unbearable. but i also admire the ants, they also persevered even when leningen defeated them again and again
December 1st, 2006 at 4:41 am
Maybe there is some sort of hidden nest and there were remaining queens in there and they reproduced to give a sequel. I mean queen ants don’t go out to battle.
December 3rd, 2006 at 10:32 am
I’ve never met such a crazy man (and hope will never) in my life! Len must have been the bravest man on the planet to dash across the two mile journey.
A analogy would be having a giant half the length of Singapore running and humans carrying poisoned spears darting at the giant. The ants were vanquished, and Len almost had too, if he hadn’t made that last effort to stand,who knows what would happen?
December 4th, 2006 at 6:02 am
I respect Leningen for his determination. Even though there did not seem to be any hope, he could still grasp onto that glimmer of hope to destroy the ants completely. When there didn’t seem to be hope, he found some. Though his peons wanted to escape, he still had showed authority towards them and… you know what? They listened.
He must have been totally desperate to try to run that two miles. He knew well enough that there was almost zero chance of even managing to get there, let alone come back. He acted like a madman for sure. The Indians’ salve didn’t help to repel the ants, I suppose. If not, he should have been alright.
He must have be exhilarated to see that his sacrifice actually killed the ants. If I were him, I would be so happy even if I died. His sacrifice saved many men from certain death.
December 5th, 2006 at 5:45 am
I was happy to read that Leiningen won the battle, though I had sort of expected it in the beginning. He is a genius who relies on all resources to win the battle, and he commands respect.
By the way, Yu Teng, he cannot FEEL happy if he is dead.
December 6th, 2006 at 3:10 am
Wow, great story. For a moment while reading the part where Leningen was running to open the dam, I thought he was going to die. So, he WAS flexible. All goes to show that being flexible pays. It also demonstrates that with just 1 great mind behind the whole operation, a battle with seriously differenciating odds can be won.
Finally Leningen decides to do something himself. Although, being a strategist, I guess he cannot be expected to do that much heavy work. I would have thought that the ants would be repelled by the petrol on Leningen and the salve that the Indian gave him. The millions of ants finally died, and all because of what? Water. The simple, everyday thing we need to survive. It’s strange how such a simple thing can kill so badly. After reading the story and looking at it again, it reminds me of killing ants with a water gun, which I once did because they were eating the leaves of my plant.
Actually, it seems strange that Leningen did’t actually put petrol into water guns and spray it at the ants, although that probably would not have done such massive harm, since that is quite a common idea. Then again, Leningen is not an ordinary man.
Well done Leningen!!
December 14th, 2006 at 2:14 am
So after all leningen did win against the ants. The events in the story happened rather quickly. I’m happy that leningen won but why was he so mad as to even put his life (and the peons’) at stake in the first place? He’s probably never even seen the like of these things in his life. In a way, I do find him a little overconfident. His ideas do work rather well, though.
And it is possible to feel happy, though not AFTER you’re dead. You can feel happy BEFORE you die.
December 14th, 2006 at 2:16 am
Sorry about the box and the smiley face. It was supposed to be an apostrophe and a bracket.
December 14th, 2006 at 1:50 pm
the queen bee opinion is interesting…. it may be possible. (oops, I meant Queen Ant) anyways, leningen won this battle. I wonder how it would look ;like if this author wrote by the ant’s ciew… a bit like Ender’s Game.. and the buggers. I reccomend this book.
December 17th, 2006 at 9:53 pm
I think that some of the ants would be able to escape (after all, ants can swim) and reproduce and form another huge army like this. It only takes one queen ant to escape and it can reproduce another huge ant colony.
December 17th, 2006 at 11:31 pm
I feel like an intruder commenting here but never mind.
I thought, did Leningen really win? I mean, it all comes down to purpose–if the ants’ purpose was to destroy the plantation then the ants won, even if they all died in the end, if Leningen’s purpose was simply to destroy the ants then he did win, but then again if he wanted to carry on with his plantation then he did lose rather badly.
As for title…at first I thought it could be something like ‘Invasion’..and then, maybe the ants were just trying to claim what they saw as their own? Because ants are part of nature and its quite striking that Leningen used petrol, a human-made substance, to combat the ants at first and lost, sort of, but later when he flooded the plantation (to the ants POV it must have been seen as a sort of tsunami?) he managed to drive the ants off. There’s not much man can do whenever there’s a natural disaster besides setting up forecast systems and evacuation plans etc which are all for running away, the place where the disaster strikes is still lost to nature. So its like, (to put it extremely crudely) when man fights nature man has practically no chance of winning, but when man uses nature to fight nature he might survive but ultimately he does not win?? Leningen did lose the farm and a lot of profits from all the patrol and crops..so maybe the title could be something like ‘Man vs. Nature’?
And maybe, just maybe, if Leningen had taken the ants more seriously than he did and not be so arrogant to think that the ants did not pose much of a problem to his plantation, he MIGHT have managed to destroy the ants without destroying his plantation as well. like there’s alot of current debates about man not destroying forests so there won’t be melting polar ice caps and the whole ‘The Day After Tommorow’ happening in real life.
As for Leningen’s being covered in ants and all that, i suppose it was a either-that-or-nothing kind of situation. If he didn’t do that, he knew the ants would get at his plantation anyway eventually no matter how long it took, and then he would lose his life. However by deciding to sacrifice his plantation at least he could walk away with all this with his life once he had recovered.
ah, but this is all spectulative thought. (:
December 18th, 2006 at 12:05 am
I think that the queen ant idea is quite good.
Kim; I didn’t know that you read Ender’s Game. Have you read Speaker for the Dead?
Do you think that Leiningen will sleep forever or wake up normally except with lots of scars?
January 2nd, 2007 at 6:08 am
Well, Leiningen defeated the ants. I think that the idea was a good one. However, the plan would have falen through if the place where Leiningen and his men were was not on high ground. Leiningen was either lucky or he had planned the flood as a last resort.
January 9th, 2007 at 6:08 am
State your name, ex-rosythian geper. Show yourself.
January 25th, 2007 at 9:01 am
Actually, I think what the author meant by saying “He slept.” is probably that he died. Afterall, his last wish was to win the battle with the ants, and he managed to that! Thus, he must have left peacefully.